It's a good story. :D It's heartwarming and makes me feel fuzzy inside.

I liked it (even though I did skip a lot. It's not you, it's me!) and it made me laugh when Sora popped in. :)

Though I'm not much of a Loz fan, I had to read this because there isn't a lot of Loz fictions (this is the only one?) and because the big guy's huggable. :} This fiction did not disappoint me, though there was a lot of sex, it curved away. The reader went to Shinra just to find Mother for Loz which can really speak out for the readers characteristics here.

It was also sweet yet sad. Sweet since Loz cares for the reader as if they were the most precious thing in the world, and sad because of the incident with Yazoo and Kadaj. Also, the ending was sad too. :P The ending was certainly nice, because Loz came back, and the reader was restored to normal health.

Excellent! :] Long chapters (Love!) and characters in character! I do suggest you spell check though! I found a typo on... chapter... 4? 3? Where Kadaj and Yazoo catch the reader. Somewhere, the word 'stop' has been mispelled to 'stoop' or maybe it's just me? Oh well. :]

Author's Response: I grew to love Loz as I worked on this, and now I can\'t even watch Advent Children without drooling over him. I was kinda proud of how the reader character turned out. She\'s definately one of my favorites. Thank you so much, and I\'m so glad you liked it. Oh, I realize my spell check mistakes now. I used the one on my ancient POS computer, and it\'s on crack or something. I re-read it some time after I posted it, and felt like smacking myself. I use the one at work now, which is a lot better, and not quite as easy to bungle. Thanks for pointing it out though, and I do intend to keep a better eye on that in the future.

Lovely, lovely, lovely! I enjoyed reading this story greatly. Slow progress between the reader and Seto, but he eventually pulled the reader in. I loved it, loved it, loved it. I hope that you'll update soon, since it's only been April since last update.. ):

I read both stories, and I'm glad that there was a sequel. At first, I thought Kabuto would die, but he didn't. :/ I also thought that Ayase's sudden vision of the future was a bit too... 'OhMyGawd!' It's not a good thing. It's like the reader suddenly announcing that they can transform into a dragon or something like that. It did make for a quick exit, but I still disliked it greatly.

I did like, however, how you ended the story. Everyone was in harmony and it seemed nice to end the story on that note.

Overall, I enjoyed the story greatly. I loved how you've created the reader to be very frail and practically weightless in the first story, which seemed to carry onto this one. Loved it.

This is one of the few fictions I can probably read again and again. It's a good, long story (I love) with a nicely developed RI character and you gradually put the reader in. She's already nicely merged with the story and Reno. :P Excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you~ =^^= I just love the ending. So much. And the sniping scenes eeeee I admit they were half the reason I wrote this. *cough* Thanks for reviewing!

S....So weird! xD Reno's somewhat like an otaku boy (with his room filled with anime and action figures of women!) who's had his biggest wish come true! It was funny and made me laugh when Reno had to leave his meeting just to watch the show on time. Also, the reader finding out she was a show, that was excellent. xD

I would say this is the most original plot I've read before, but I've read something like this, only it was a manga the reader popped out of, except the author never actually updated it. I congratulate you for updating your story! Woo~ :)

Author's Response: (lol) It\'s a fun idea that I\'m enjoying quite a bit. I haven\'t read that one, and though I\'ve tried to be original I was pretty sure someone had done it before, somewhere. Thanks so much for your compliments, and I do intend to update soon.

Muwaha! A story where the reader actually dies! I applaud you! It's nice that the reader usually has a nice ending, but it's better when something tragic happens, such as this. I think you've captured Itachi well (even though I know little about him~). I thought that he was going to let the reader live like he let Sasuke, but plot twists! I love it! Once again, wonderful.

Author's Response: :D Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I agree that some fics need to have bittersweet endings like this and plot twists are fun! XD Thank you. C: