Reviewer: XxKeeper_of_HalloweenxX (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hm...a female Ukitake. Interesting. I do have a suggestion though.

Perhaps you should give the fem!Ukitake a different name. It seems lazy to keep the definitely masculine name. It doesn't have to be a starkly different sounding name either. It can be a variant of the existing name such as Junko or even a unisex name is acceptable. That would actually work out better if, like in your other gender bender stories that character is mistaken as a male. I hope this helped and I enjoyed reading this! ^^

~KoH